An Exciting and Enjoyable Party – by Choi Bu Yong, Year 10, Sayfol International School
As
the sun glided down the horizon, I could feel my heart beating in my ribcage.
Never had I felt this excited before. It was the day I could show my hidden
talent. My feet were dancing by themselves and I couldn’t stop humming. I
picked out the best clothes I had - my dark brown jeans and a bright red silk
shirt. I was ready to enjoy the thrilling party!
As
I opened the main gate of the party hall, I could feel that the hall was filled
with heat and passion. I calmed down my trembling heart and moved forward step
by step until I reached the centre of the main hall. I raised my hand in the
air to get the attention of everyone. I was right. Everyone stopped dancing and
watched me. At first, I regretted my action but on the other hand, I enjoyed
the unstoppable excitement. My heart started to beat furiously again. Numerous
pairs of eyes concentrated on me and I could feel that my body was becoming hotter
and hotter like well-cooked rice. Then I just left my body to the beat of the
music.
At
the beginning, I moved my body only a little but as the music went on, my steps
became faster and faster. I felt as if my heart was sealed with some unknown
energy. I could hardly bear it anymore as my heart was pumping as if it was
going to burst. At the same time, the music went up to a climax. The unknown
seal which covered my heart broke. Without thinking, I became a passionate
dancer. My body was totally controlled by the beat and I could hear people
shouting and cheering. Some of them were dancing along with me. When I was
dancing, I felt like I was out of my mind. I was unable to control myself.
I
stopped my movements after realising that my shirt was drenched in sweat. I
took a deep, sweet breath. I looked around and people were grinning at and
waving to me. I couldn’t stop feeling the joy. I was deeply satisfied with life
and everything. Some people approached me and gave me kisses. I felt like I had
become a big star of the fabulous party. Then I enjoyed the rest of the party
with my admirers.
After
the party, I went home. It was 3 a.m. I kept smiling to myself as I thought
about the party. I still couldn’t forget the passion and heat which filled the
party hall as well as the beat of the music flowing all over my body. Without
letting go of the great excitement, I fell sweetly asleep.
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